Discussione: Linguistic Advices

Hello everyone, i'm new here.
I'm a languages student from Sydney and sometimes i manage to get easy jobs as translator.
I have to say that i'm pretty prepared when it comes to speak italian sentences, and with the right attention and hints i can write in proper italian as well. That's thanks to my italian parents. We speak italian when we're home and twice a year we come back to Italy. However i perfectly know tht my italian is not that perfect and i wanted to have some external feedbacks.
From a couple of months now, i'm translating the blog section of this (NDR: link rimosso a sito di casino online) website. I translate from english to italian.
What do you think of my writing?

Thanks a lot in advance =D

Abbiamo rimosso il tuo link a un sito di casino online, ed e' il primo ammonimento, se la questione si ripete sarai bannato.